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Valentine Weis is a salvager in the future wastelands of Utah. Wrestling with body dysphoria, he dreams of earning enough money to afford citizenship in Salt Lake City – a utopia where the testosterone and surgery he needs to transition is free, the food is plentiful, and folk are much less likely to be shot full of arrows by salt pirates. But earning that kind of money is a pipe dream, until he meets the exceptionally handsome Osric.

Once a powerful AI in Salt Lake City, Osric has been forced into an android body against his will and sent into the wasteland to offer Valentine a job on behalf of his new employer – an escort service seeking to retrieve their stolen androids. The reward is a visa into the city, and a chance at the life Valentine’s always dreamed of. But as they attempt to recover the “merchandise”, they encounter a problem: the android ladies are becoming self-aware, and have no interest in returning to their old lives.

The prize is tempting, but carrying out the job would go against everything Valentine stands for, and would threaten the fragile found family that’s kept him alive so far. He’ll need to decide whether to risk his own dream in order to give the AI a chance to live theirs.

World Running Down is Al Hess’s first traditionally published novel; he is also an incredible artist. Check out his instagram! He also has a website.

Content warnings (from Al Hess’ website): profanity; alcohol use; M/M open door sex and sexual elements; brief violence; brief misgendering and transphobia; body dysphoria; abduction; classism; risk of forced sex trafficking; toxic friendship/codependency; a fictional denomination of Mormonism and discussion of religion

​Rep: trans, gay, lesbian, non-binary, and (briefly mentioned) polyamorous rep; M/M romance
ADHD main character (some people have claimed Valentine for Team Autistic as well, and I am totally okay with that!)

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My Review

I picked this book up from the Angry Robot Books stall at FantasyCon, and got a very cool art card with it, drawings of Valentine and Osric. Al Hess did the drawings and the cover of his book. I want the rest of the postcards Al drew for the characters but I don’t think they’re available anymore. I think I’m part of the Angry Robot blog tour for Al Hess’ next book, Key Lime Sky, later in the year. I’m looking forward to that. I’ve also signed up for Hess’ newsletter, so I’ve got the ebook for a pre-curser to World Running Down to read.

The plot: Valentine Weiss is a scavenger in a future Utah, where the cities are a haven of free healthcare, transport and education, where there is food in abundance and stable housing. Outside of the heavily guarded cities are small settlements and encampments living on marginalised land, home to marginalised people – the religious conservatives, the social conservatives, the Queer and the poor. To get in to Salt Lake City, with the medical care he needs – testosterone and surgery – he needs a visa and to pass a citizenship test. But that requires money.

With his friend, Ace, or Audrey, who is hoping to get a visa so she can join her distant family in the city, he takes on various jobs out in the dangerous salt flats and mountains. The pair run fuel runs for small settlements, fight off salt pirates, and search for anyway to make money. One a job to drop off fuel, they find a messenger waiting for them.

This is Osric, an AI Steward forced into an android body. Osric doesn’t understand his body, or what it needs – food, water, sleep, going to the toilet. He’s overwhelmed by all the sensations, and irritated by clothes. So he spends a lot of time taking his clothes off, and only putting them on when he really has to.

Valentine is very attracted to Osric, first physically, and then, getting to know him, to his kindness, intelligence and empathy. Valentine feels so much empathy for his new friend, he’s overwhelmed by care for him, and for everyone else. He helps Osric with basic human tasks and then listens to his message. A job, as yet unknown, for a wealthy person in Salt Lake, with the reward of clothes and a visa.

The clothes are important. Valentine feels more himself in a suit. It helps him cope with his dysphoria. Ace loves the dresses. The trio head to Salt Lake, where an interaction with another Steward at the reception centre helps Osric understand more about how he ended up in an android body, and to set in motion events that would change society, although they don’t know it. The job turns out to be a retrieval of goods – eight female androids stolen by a former brothel manager. Osric, we discover, has been embodied to be the new manager, while Valentine and Audrey are need to recover the androids.

The trio go back out on the road after some contretemps in the brothel, and soon find the androids in a camp of Mormon salt pirates. An awl used as a weapon brings about the discovery that the androids are gaining sentience, and they really don’t want to go back to the brothel.

This brings Audrey and Valentine into conflict. He won’t force sentient beings into being escorts if they don’t want to, but she is desperate for the visa that will get her to her family. Osric needs to go back whether he wants to or not. His body is owned by the brothel, and he wants to return to the collective of the Stewards. What will they do?

Hess is an autistic, trans writer, and I can tell. Not that I’m judging, I really appreciate the representation. Osric is right; clothes are itchy and uncomfortable! I often don’t wear clothes if I can avoid it.

Not being a dread pirate, I can’t tell you how accurate his portrayal of the internal experience of ADHD is, or the struggles with dyscalculia the Valentine clearly has. I do have a lot of AuADHD and ADHD colleagues, friends and relatives, so I can recognise the external manifestations. I also get the frustrations with the world and with people who don’t get it, or won’t take the time to understand.

I identified strongly with both Valentine and Osric, and their struggles with embodiment and identity. It brought up some stuff, okay, I’m working on it. Can I be an android, please? There’s a lot of emotional angst and conflict while the pair work out what they feel and what they want to do. It hurt. I loved it.

Al Hess writes ‘cosy sci-fi’ and I like it. The story are domestic and emotionally charged, placed in a future world that is both better and worse. In the cities, life is materially great, if you don’t think about what’s outside. Life outside if the cities is brutal, but there is love and community, even if it’s hard to get food and medical care. It’s morally complex and questions the utopian ideals of some sci fi.

It’s cosy, gay and neurodivergent adventure in the desert and I really enjoyed this book and I’m looking forward to reading more by Hess. I have already ordered a copy for someone and recommended it be added to the fiction section of the Little Neurodivergent Library at work.