Review: Ignore All Previous Instructions, by Ada Hoffmann

Format: 320 pages, Paperback
Published: May 12, 2026 by Tachyon Publications
ISBN: 9781616964566 (ISBN10: 1616964561)

Book Description

A script supervisor for an AI media conglomerate is caught between her intense need for an orderly life and her deeper, darker queer desires. From the creator of the Outside trilogy, a heartfelt interplanetary epic of identity, longing, and a space pirate who smuggles inappropriate stories.

Kelli Reynolds loves creating stories more than anything in the world. But on Callisto, a generative AI company called Inspiration owns everything, including all the media, and only Inspiration determines which stories can be told.

Kelli has a rare and coveted job in which her autism is to her advantage: She precisely edits AI output into “appropriate” stories for Inspiration’s massive TV audience. Her proudest creation is the pirate Orlando—a dashing do-gooder based on stories she used to tell friends.

Reenter Kelli’s ex-boyfriend Rowan, the person Kelli based Orlando on. Back when they were teenagers, their relationship was a secret. Kelli had thought that Rowan, a trans man, was her schoolmate Em, a girl.

Rowan is tangled up in the black market after he needed to get money for gender reassignment surgery. He needs Kelli’s help with something . . . illegal. So, now Kelli has to decide: Will she risk the safe, tidy story of her life now for the world she once wished for? What would Orlando do?

Passionate, dangerous, and tender, Ignore All Previous Instructions is a sweeping, poignant novel about censorship, forbidden love, and growing up.

My Review

I’ve known about this book for a while, because I get Ada Hoffmann’s newsletter. I got a NetGalley copy in April when I made myself go back to NetGalley, but I was struggling with the ebook version. Then my pre-ordered copy arrived on Thursday, and I started reading it yesterday. I have finished it after spending all day reading, non-stop, other than to get food. Totally immersed!

Kelli is autistic, and not the easy to empathise with cute child who is scared and shy type, but the screaming meltdowns, biting, punching type. I recognise her in me. When it all gets too painful and you can’t push the feelings down anymore, then it just explodes. Also, if you or your child are having screaming meltdowns, that’s a sign of some severely unmet needs. Instead of beating yourself or your child up for it (literally or figuratively), work out what that unmet need is AND MEET IT.

You can also be both the screaming meltdowns and the shy, scared type of Autistic, we’re complex like that.

Because we’re human.

Rowan is obviously ADHD, and as a child is misunderstood and bullied by teachers even if the kids all like him. Yeah, that sounds familiar too. Rowan’s need to transition and his need for stimulation lead him into a life that might be considered criminal. He smuggles illegal media to people in the Jovian system – that’s any media made by anyone not Inspiration.

Inspiration is the mega-corp that controls everything on Callisto. Its LLM is in everything and nobody can escape it. Human creativity is cut and controlled by models that decide on the appropriate content that will keep people happy. It’s a way to turn people into mindless robots while telling them that the company is generous and loving.

Kelli has tried not following the rules and it caused a lot of pain. Kelli tried to follow the rules and was successful – one of the 10% who had an actual job on Callisto, and one she finds fulfilling. She is a script supervisor for Inspiration, going through the outlines and scripts the genAI produces for a series featuring a character Kelli has developed since she was 8. But she can’t own the work or have her name on it, because that would be ‘stealing’ from Inspiration.

After a terrible event when they were 14, Rowan and Kelli don’t speak to each other for ten years. Rowan returns, having transitioned (in a world where transition is illegal and no one talks about Queerness lest it should ‘infect’ children) and asks for a favour. Would Kelli join him on a trip to Io to meet someone who really loves the series she’s written?

Reluctantly, Kelli agrees, and takes a few precautions, because Rowan is ‘bad’ and doesn’t follow the rules. It can’t just be talking to someone. She finds things are very much not the way Rowan said they were. For a start, the person they are meeting is the daughter of a crime boss and they want her to steal from Inspiration for the girl’s sixteenth birthday.

What follows is a heist that goes remarkably well, they get what they need and no-one gets hurt.

It all goes to hell when they get back to Io, and Inspiration’s law enforcement team arrive just at the critical moment. There is violence, explosions, a mad dash to the ship. It’s all very exciting. The emotional resolution is slow to come for Kelli but she finally works things out, just a little bit, enough to realise she wants to be with Rowan again, even if it means she loses her life on Callisto.

Their story as children is told in flashback chapters where we discover that Inspiration prevents children from learning that humans come in more than two binary heterosexual varieties, and children who look for information are prevented from learning anything. Trans people ‘don’t exist’ in this world, and what two adults do in private is no one’s business, but ‘we don’t want that in public’, so lesbian and gay people are shunned and bullied, seen as an inherant threat to children. Does that sound familiar?

Some people are so certain of their righteousness they don’t care who dies so long as they can have their exclusively cis het world. When Kelli and Rowan’s friend Elaine dies by suicide at the age of 14, Kelli decides to squash her queerness down, lock it in a box, and follow the rules. Rowan decides that he’s getting out as soon as possible. He’s already started sharing ‘illegal’ media among their tiny three person queer community, and finding ways to hack or us injection prompts to bypass controls on the computers and internet (what there is of it on Callisto) in order to jail break them, so it’s just a matter of scaling up, taking media to other frightened, isolated LGBTQIA+ people across the system, and helping to form a community.

Kelli is a realistic autistic character, Rowan is realistic as an ADHDer, while their friend Elaine has some clear mental health issues that the therapy bot is not helping. Therapy bots do not help, just like robots can’t help Autistic kids with social skills. Sorry, but trying to make us neurotypical as cheaply as possible won’t work. People with mental health problems need actual therapy and neurodivergent kids need to have their needs and learning styles respected. Just fucking do that.

These are two major parts of the narrative – neurodivergence and queerness. These are important to the author – they are autistic and genderfluid – and can speak with authority from experience of growing up in a system than pathologises both. This book benefits from that knowledge and experience; in providing realistic characters and experiences that the reader can relate to, Ada Hoffmann does what Rowan tries to do in the novel – give people stories about people like them. We all need to see ourselves in stories, being ourselves honestly and openly, finding hope and community in the stories, with other readers, and in the real world.

Reading the Afterward, I found a lot of common ground with the author, and appreciated the citations for their positions. I also understand the use of stories and using fiction to help interpret the world. I am not joking when I say I learnt to be human by reading books. Made for a strange combination at times, since I’ve liked fantasy since I was 12, but also read classics like Pride and Prejudice. Unlike me, Ada Hoffmann did something with their love of storytelling and makes a bit of a living from it.

Ada Hoffmann, under their legal name, is a PhD adjunct professor at a Canadian university, who works in computer sciences. They did their PhD in ‘creative computing’ – how can computers be used in creative work, what does it mean to sat a computer programme has been creative, that sort of thing. They thought LLMs would be used by creatives playing around and generating starting points. In the last few years, they have changed their approach, and done research into how the proliferation of LLMs/genAI has affected creatives – the damage it has done to writers and artists who live precariously as it is, including having their work stolen to train the LLMs.

LLMs are just scaled up predictive text, working from statistical analysis of what the next word in a sentence could be; they do not create, nothing they produce is original, and it amplifies any biases already present in the material it scrapes for training. The ‘artwork’ it creates is derivative and frankly bloody crap in most cases, it can’t do hands or faces, and videos are obviously faked – look for juddering on moving faces.

Basically, Ada Hoffmann is something of an expert in all the things this book is about. And they know how to write a good story. What’s not to like?

I really enjoyed the realistic space craft and space flight. The idea of sitting on top of an explosive in order to get out of a planet or moon’s gravity well does not appeal, as much as I’d love to travel the stars and see what’s out there. There’s also a discussion of how long it would take to get from Jupiter to Saturn, putting these things in perspective.

The colonies are described in enough detail to give each one its own character, and they also seem to be sensible renderings of what a colony on Callisto or Ganymede would mean.

Don’t go to Io.

It’s too volcanic for a colony.

Everyone will die.

This story was gripping, I raced through it, and I needed to know what was going to happen next. The emotional arcs were realistic and the ending satisfying. Highly recommended.

Review: Dead Silence, by S.A. Barnes

Format: 352 pages, Paperback
Published: January 24, 2023 by Tor Trade
ISBN: 9781250778543

Titanic meets Event Horizon in this SF horror novel in which a woman and her crew board a decades-lost luxury cruiser and find the wreckage of a nightmare that hasn’t yet ended.

Claire Kovalik is days away from being unemployed―made obsolete―when her beacon repair crew picks up a strange distress signal. With nothing to lose and no desire to return to Earth, Claire and her team decide to investigate.

What they find is the Aurora, a famous luxury spaceliner that vanished on its maiden tour of the solar system more than twenty years ago. A salvage claim like this could set Claire and her crew up for life. But a quick search of the ship reveals something isn’t right.

Whispers in the dark. Flickers of movement. Messages scrawled in blood. Claire must fight to hold on to her sanity and find out what really happened on the Aurora before she and her crew meet the same ghastly fate.


My Review

I ordered this book after seeing it on one of the GoodReads challenge lists. I hadn’t heard of it before although the author’s name pinged something in my brain. I liked the description and thought it would be entertaining.

Oh boy! I read the hype at the beginning of the book when it arrived and thought it might be exaggeration, just a touch.

I was wrong! It’s really good!

I read this book in an evening. At one point I had to skip forward to find out what happened, and then I went back once I was reassured at least some people would be alright.

The story is told from the perspective of the traumatised and quite likely psychic Claire Kovalik, team lead for a maintenance crew. The five-person crew service the comms network that’s scattered across the solar system, they live for weeks at a time on a tiny space vessel, being picked up and dropped off by larger freighters. It’s Claire’s last rotation, at 33 she’s considered too old, and due to her history, too unstable, to carry on.

Then, they hear a beacon. After an argument, they head out into uncharted territory to find the source of the beacon. What they find is the first and only luxury space liner. Twenty years lost, the Aurora’s disappearance destroyed the company that built it, allowing Verux, the company Claire works for, to take over. It’s worth a fortune to those who find and salvage it. But there are secrets.

Claire and her crew go aboard the Aurora and find terrible things.

We swap to Claire in the mental hospital, some time after she boards the Aurora with her crew. She doesn’t remember much. Her old mentor, Max, and a bully from Verux, Reed, a nepo-hire, who is determined to prove she murdered her crew for money, are questioning her. Claire tells them everything she can remember, up to the point where her skull is fractured. The hallucinations, the violent deaths of her colleagues, the developing romantic relationship between her and Kane, her number two, and the plan to get the Aurora back to the comms network so they can call for help.

Reed fails and Max recruits Claire to go back to the Aurora with him – she’s the only person who survived. Her mental illness might actually have helped. When they get there, Claire finds the neatly wrapped bodies of three of her colleagues and the last hallucinating in a room padded with mattresses. She also finds a conspiracy that Verux really don’t want to get out.

There is madness. There are explosions.

I loved it!

Claire is a beautifully flawed character. She blames herself for everything when it’s clearly not her fault, she refuses to let people care for her and fears what will happen when they do – convinced she’ll cause their deaths somehow, and she’s severely traumatised by events of her childhood. Also, she can see ghosts.

The relationship between Claire and Kane is sweet and develops naturally as they go through difficult events. The resistance Claire feels about getting close to people is a response to her trauma, and Kane’s calming presence, knowing her past, slowly helps her build trust in herself and him.

The corporate evil of Varux is entirely believable – destroy a competitor and then try to clear up the mess by murdering people. I know this has happened in real life, although usually the firms involved distance themselves by saying it was rogue contractors – see VWs slave plantations in the Amazon during the 1980s, or mining companies that regularly allow their ‘security contractors’ to murder local activists – especially in the Amazon. Putting it in space makes it sound like fiction, but this shit is happening in the real world now. I direct you to Silent Coup: How Corporations Overthrew Democracy by Claire Provost and Matt Kennard ( I have a Left Book Club copy that I’m reading at the moment) for more information.

I was absolutely rivetted by this book, by the mystery of how the people went mad and what happened to Claire, allowing her to escape and return to rescue what was left of her crew. Definitely going on my favourites list for this year.

TBR Review: A Memory Called Empire, by Arkady Martine

Format: 448 pages, Paperback
Published: March 26, 2019 by Tor
ISBN: 9781529001587

Ambassador Mahit Dzmare arrives in the center of the multi-system Teixcalaanli Empire only to discover that her predecessor, the previous ambassador from their small but fiercely independent mining Station, has died. But no one will admit that his death wasn’t an accident—or that Mahit might be next to die, during a time of political instability in the highest echelons of the imperial court.

Now, Mahit must discover who is behind the murder, rescue herself, and save her Station from Teixcalaan’s unceasing expansion—all while navigating an alien culture that is all too seductive, engaging in intrigues of her own, and hiding a deadly technological secret—one that might spell the end of her Station and her way of life—or rescue it from annihilation.


My Review

This is another one from my TBR Pile that I’ve been meaning to read for years. I finally sat down and read it a week or so ago.

Mahit is a 26 year old Stationer, sent to the imperial capital of Teixcalaan as Ambassador. There, she finds her predecessor has been murdered and then her implant with his memory on it breaks, leaving her flailing around without help. Her only ally is her cultural attaché, Seagrass. They are blown up, held prisoner by a friend of the old ambassador, and have to get help from rebels, as the Emperor weakens and several successors fight for the throne. Eventually, Mahit hears from a possible ally on her Station that aliens are attacking human space, and this is enough for the Emperor to bring a halt to the fighting at home by focusing forces on the alien threat, and away from Stationer space.

Mahit and Seagrass go through some terrifying events but the writing is so good that every emotional turn is understandable. Her immersion in a culture that she previously thought she knew so well when she was studying it, but finds so confusing in person, really captures the dislocation of immersion in a new culture. Without her imago to guide her, Mahit doesn’t have the local knowledge that she’d need to fit it, and she is made to feel alien and not quite human because she is not Teicalaanlitzlim. She is an amusing barbarian to her hosts. Mahit does use this to her advantage, and sometimes disadvantage, in the complex court of the Emperor.

I enjoyed the narrative, structure, and tone of this novel. It explores empire from the perspective of an outsider, showing the hypocrisy of imperial states. The descriptions of the city and the people are rich and detailed. There is a hint of both the Byzantine and the Aztec empires in the descriptions of the clothes, culture and architecture, but the living conditions in the out regions of the city feel more Victorian London. The author has clearly drawn on many sources but it feels cohesive and inspired by those sources, rather than direct copying.

I enjoyed this book, and I can see why it’s so lauded. I’ve started book two, so expect a review of A Desolation Called Peace at some point.

Review: The Way Up Is Death, by Dan Hanks

Release Date
2025-01-28
Formats
Ebook, Paperback
EBook ISBN
28th January 2025 | 9781915202956 | epub | £5.99/$9.99/$11.99
Paperback ISBN
28th January 2025 | 9781915202949 | Paperback | £9.99/$18.99/$24.99

When a mysterious tower appears in the skies over England, thirteen strangers are pulled from their lives to stand before it as a countdown begins. Above the doorway is one word: ASCEND.

As they try to understand why they’ve been chosen and what the tower is, it soon becomes clear the only way out of this for everyone is… up.

And so begins a race to the top with the group fighting to hold on to its humanity, through sinking ships, haunted houses and other waking nightmares. Can they each overcome their differences and learn to work together or does the winner take all? What does the tower want of them and what is the price to escape?

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TBR Pile Review: Spec Fic for Newbies Vol. 2, by Tiffani Angus and Val Nolan

Beam aboard your own Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror classroom with the next volume of the BSFA-shortlisted writing-guide series!

Join Tiffani Angus (Ph.D.) and Val Nolan (Ph.D.) for a whirlwind introduction to the storytelling basics of 30 more subgenres and major tropes from across the limitless realms of Speculative Fiction.

Learn about Space Opera, Folk Horror, Climate Fiction, Werewolves, Astronauts, Mythic Fantasy, Goblin Markets, Dragons, and many more with deep dives into each subgenre’s history and development, spotter’s guides to typical examples, pitfalls to watch out for in your own writing, and activities to help you get started! All derived from a combined two decades of university-level practices and experience!

Spec Fic for Newbies breaks genres into bite-sized pieces for students or for any budding writer. It offers a welcoming introduction to how writers, filmmakers, and other creatives can begin to explore the infinite potential of Science Fiction, Fantasy, and Horror to create new stories beyond the boundaries of the ordinary.

This is not another dusty rulebook. This is a portal to endless other worlds!

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ARC Pile Review: Space Brooms!, by A.G. Rodriguez


EBook ISBN
25th March 2025 | 9781915998514 | epub | £5.99/$9.99/$11.99
Paperback ISBN
25th March 2025 | 9781915998507 | Trade Paperback | £9.99/$18.99/$24.99

Johnny Gomez, a custodian – or space broom – on Kilgore Station, teams up with a pair of smugglers to sell a stolen data chip full of video game avatars and finally make his fortune


Everyone aboard Kilgore Station is living their best life. Everyone except for Johnny Gomez.

While humans, the augmented, and aliens of all shapes and sizes enjoy exotic cuisine on the dining deck, or gamble away their credits on the entertainment deck, Johnny is elbow-deep in oily, black, alien excrement. A ‘space broom’ custodian for the entire station.

This was obviously not the life Johnny dreamt of. Ten years ago, he travelled to Kilgore, the farthest space station in our solar system, in search of fortune like everyone else. Some people are just luckier than others.

Yet his meaningless, uneventful existence is immediately turned upside down when he happens upon a tiny glass data-chit, hidden amongst the alien poop he must clean up. Unbeknownst to him, every nefarious creature in the solar system will soon be after him to claim it for their own.

With the help of his augmented roommate, a pair of smugglers and a mysterious and beautiful stranger, Johnny fights off thugs and sails as fast as possible to earth’s moon, Luna, in effort to sell the chit to the Obinna Crime Syndicate. But with assassins and mobsters on their tail, the trip is anything but a cakewalk. And Luna itself proves to be nothing like a safe haven, when Johnny’s painful past finally catches up to him…

Space Brooms! is a heart-warming, tongue-in-cheek homage to all things sci-fi, from television and movies, to video games and books.

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Angry Robot Blog Tour Review: The Armageddon Protocol, by Dan Moren

Release Date: 2024-09-24
Formats: Ebook, Paperback
EBook ISBN
24th September 2024 | 9781915998019 | epub | £4.99/$6.99/$7.99
Paperback ISBN
24th September 2024 | 9781915998002 | epub | £9.99/$18.99/$23.99

Description

On the heels of the terrorist attacks on the planet Nova’s capital, the Special Projects Team finds itself targeted by the ambitious new head of the Commonwealth Intelligence Directorate, Aidan Kester. When Kovalic and General Adaj are arrested on charges of treason, Tapper, Brody, Sayers, and Taylor are forced to go on the run. While Kovalic and the general attempt to uncover an Illyrican mole within the Commonwealth’s intelligence apparatus, it’s up to the rest of the team to clear their friends’ names, even if that means making a deal with an old enemy to carry out a daring heist that might just get them all killed.

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TBR Pile Review: Ten Low, by Stark Holborn

Format: 332 pages, Paperback
Published: June 1, 2021 by Titan Books
ISBN: 9781789096620 (ISBN10: 1789096626)

Blurb

Ten Low is eking out a living at the universe’s edge. An ex-medic, ex-con, desperate to escape her memories of the war, she still hasn’t learnt that no good deed goes unpunished.

Attempting to atone for her sins, she pulls a teenage girl from a crashed lifecraft. But Gabriella Ortiz is no ordinary girl—she is a genetically-engineered super soldier and decorated General, part of the army that kept Ten prisoner. Worse, Ten realises the crash was an assassination attempt, and that someone wants Ortiz dead…


My Review

I’m on a bit of a space western kick at the moment after reading Frontier last week. I’m reading Hel’s Eight next.

There are spoilers below, don’t read if you don’t want to know what happens.

Summary: I enjoyed this one. going to read Hel’s Eight now, as soon as I finish writing this review.

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TBR Pile Audiobook Review: Children of Memory, by Adrian Tchaikovsky

The unmissable follow-up to the highly acclaimed Children of Time and Children of Ruin.

When Earth failed, it sent out arkships to establish new outposts. So the spaceship Enkidu and its captain, Heorest Holt, carried its precious human cargo to a potential new paradise. Generations later, this fragile colony has managed to survive on Imir, eking out a hardy existence. Yet life is tough, and much technological knowledge has been lost.

Then strangers appear, on a world where everyone knows their neighbour. They possess unparalleled knowledge and thrilling new technology – for they have come from the stars, to help humanity’s lost colonies. But not all is as it seems on Imir.

As the visitors lose track of time and memories, they discover the colonists fear unknown enemies and Imir’s own murky history. Neighbour turns against neighbour, as society fractures in the face of this terrifying foe. Perhaps some other intelligence is at work, toying with colonists and space-faring scientists alike? But not all questions are so easily answered – and the price may be the colony itself.

Children of Memory by Arthur C. Clarke Award-winning author Adrian Tchaikovsky is a far-reaching space opera spanning generations, species and galaxies.

  • Format: 16 pages, Audible Audio
  • Published: November 24, 2022 by Tor
  • Language: English

My Review

I have copies of all of the books in this series and have listened to them all as audiobooks.

I found this one really confusing. On the surface it’s simple, a team of Humans, portids, uplifted octopuses, the aggregate lifeform from Nod, and a pair of corvids, visit a new planet, called Imir. Something strange is going on there though. The people are afraid of something outside of their small colony and they don’t know what it is. Things keep going strangely wrong. They keep happening over and over again, in slightly different ways. Miranda, the person who embodies the aggregate lifeform from Nod, is deeply invested in the events and can’t escape from Imir.

The simulation hypothesis is explored in this novel; are we living in a simulation? What is sentience? The ideas are explored through the characters of Gethi and Gothi, a pair of Corvids who need to be together to explore and draw conclusions.

I really liked Gethi and Gothi, they’re funny and drive the plot forward. I love the way they talk back to Avrana Kern and their discussions about sentience, and their conclusion that they aren’t sentient, and also that either everyone is or no one is.

If you enjoyed the first two books in the series I highly recommend this third book. I think this is the final book in the series, which would be a shame, as I want to know where else the sentient species go and who they meet.

TBR Pile Review: Blood of the Chosen, by Django Wexler

Paperback, 480 pages
Published July 7th 2022 by Head of Zeus 
(first published October 5th 2021) ISBN13: 9781788543248
Edition Language: English
Series: Burningblade & Silvereye #2

Blurb

Standing on opposite sides of a looming civil war, two siblings discover that not even ties of blood will keep them from splitting the world in two.

Four hundred years ago, a cataclysmic war cracked the world open and exterminated the Elder races. Amid the ashes, their human inheritor, the Dawn Republic, stands guard over lands littered with eldritch relics and cursed by plaguespawn outbreaks. But a new conflict is looming and brother and sister Maya and Gyre have found themselves on opposite sides.

At the age of five, Maya was taken by the Twilight Order and trained to be a centarch, wielding forbidden arcana to enforce the Dawn Republic’s rule. On that day, her brother, Gyre, swore to destroy the Order that stole his sister… whatever the cost.

Twelve years later, brother and sister are two very different people: she is Burningblade, the Twilight Order’s brightest prodigy; he is Silvereye, thief, bandit, revolutionary.

For centuries, the Dawn Republic has ruled over the land unopposed. No more.

Deep below the Gap, Gyre Silvereye discovered a city, hidden far from human eyes. There, the ghouls have dwelt for four hundred years in hibernation, awaiting the moment to wreak their vengeance on the Dawn Republic.

With their help, Gyre can finally see a way to overthrow the all-powerful Twilight Order. But the ghouls do not give their trust easily, and Gyre will need to secure the alliance of the human rebels to the south if they are to even stand a chance. And uniting the two won’t be simple.

His sister Maya still fights for the Order. But after recent events, she is no longer certain where her loyalties lie. Chasing the origins of a mysterious artefact to a long-lost library, she just might find the truth – whether she is ready for it or not.

My Review

I have two editions of this book, and the first one in the series. I have Goldsboro Books special editions in hardback, and paperbacks. The paperback from Head of Zeus arrived on Thursday, because I had it on pre-order. I have two copies of the first book in the Burningblade & Silvereye series too, Ashes of the Sun, which I reviewed in March 2021. I also have both as audiobooks. I couldn’t get on with the audiobook narration for this one, or I’d have reviewed it before now. It’s very unfortunate, since I quite liked the audiobook of Ashes of the Sun and was looking forward to listening to this one too.

Gyre Silvereye and Maya Burningblade are siblings on opposite sides of the social order. As a Centarch, Maya represents the ruling Order, heirs to the mysterious Chosen, while Gyre is a rebel, a thief and determined to bring the Order down, with the help of the ‘ghouls’, a sentient species who are almost extinct and hated by humanity.

The ghouls are a rather large, humanoid species, with hair and fangs, who use dhak, a form of magic. They live in the hidden Refuge, an ancient ghoul city that is now almost empty after 99% of the ghouls died because of the plague that also wiped out the Chosen. Ghouls use constructs to do all the heavy lifting, and have weapons that Gyre can use in his rebellion. He ropes Elariel, a ghoul who worked for Naumoriel (villain in the first book), into helping him. He offers the ruling parliament of the ghouls a way to get revenge on the Chosen and the Order by supporting his rebellion with weapons and tools. Elariel undergoes a terrible operation as punishment which makes her look human to help with the mission.

Kit is now happily running around in multiple construct bodies, lamenting only her inability to fuck, although she does discover how much she enjoys voyeurism and fighting in multiple places at once. The three leave Refuge for Deepfire, where they collect three large wagons and a lot of alchemical equipment, and Sarah, an alchemist formerly of the Order who joined the rebels in Deepfire. They travel through the Splintered Kingdoms to Khirkhaz, a mountainous and forested region where a Commune led by the ousted Apphia, Baron Kotzed, fights to retake the area from the Republic and return to her family’s tower.

Meanwhile, Maya, her partner Beq, and their scout, Varo, go looking for an Archive in the mountains in the north west, beyond Deepfire and near the coast. Many Centarchs had attempted to clear the place of plaguespawn to reach the Archive, but had failed. Maya and her small team find a village, a mystery and information about the Thing and Maya’s deiat. Beq gets over-excited by the possibilities of the archive. They return to the Forge, where they are sent out on a secret mission that involves them going to the capital of the Republic, Skyreach to break into Kyriliarch Prodominus’ private warehouse. There, they discover a great secret and more information about betrayal in the Order.

The two groups meet in Khirkhaz during the fight to defend Apphia’s claim from the Republic. They go off on a mission of their own that could destroy or save the world…

The world and its history is explored further as the two groups travel across the continent by different means, and we learn more about the Chosen and the ghouls. It becomes increasingly obvious that humans have been lied to for centuries and that the Order is fractured. Who can anyone trust? The tension lies between what the reader knows from following Gyre and his group, and what Maya believes to be true based on what she is told and what she finds in her adventures. They are both driven by idealism, which doesn’t do well in the real world. Gyre finds his Khirkhaz Commune is really a collection of argumentative, disunited factions from different backgrounds, only nominally led by Apphia. Maya discovers that she’s been lied to repeatedly, although we don’t really see how it changes things for her, other than her internal confusion about who to trust. Hopefully, it’ll become clearer in the third book.

The relationship between Gyre and Maya is fraught before they meet up in battle, but it becomes more so as they realise they need to work together. Gyre is deeply affected by his sister’s actions in the last chapters, but still helps her. I’ll be interested to see the fall out in the next book. I have a feeling that Gyre and company might be arrested and Maya is placed in an even more compromised position, or the Corruptor will overcome the Order. Pretty sure Tanax and Basal are corrupted. I hope the ghouls are able to save themselves though and humanity gets its collective head out of its collective arse. The Order and Republic are clearly positioned as compromised and controlling in these books, while Gyre and the rebels as ‘heroes’, but it’s more complicated. No one group is evil or good. They’re humans; venal, greedy and selfish in some cases, deceived and deceptive, selfless, determined to improve the world, and generous. The technology has limits even if magic is involved and people get exhausted, no one can fight forever, weapons and tools break and ammunition or fuel runs out. Like in the real world.

There is a development of Maya and Beq’s relationship carries through their chapters, as they support each other and realise how important they are to each other. I like their relationship; they’re young and inexperienced, and trying to work out what they are to each other. It’s sweet. Thankfully, the author manages not to make their sexuality a big deal, it’s just a background fact that both are girls and they are in a relationship. It’s the development of their relationship that’s important, not the fact it exists.

Beq is a marvellous character, geeky, intelligent and brave, who doesn’t have much confidence in herself, but can do anything she sets her mind to. I also enjoyed the little scene where she’s reading while waiting for Maya to finish her visit Jaedia in the hospital, and doesn’t notice Maya come out of the room because the book is so engrossing. Been there, done that. Haven’t we all? She also struggles with jokes and is very literal. She’s practical and loves Maya deeply although she doesn’t seem to have many other relationships or friends.

Kit, having died and then returned as the controlling intellect in a construct army, is a lot more fun that in the first book. Death seems to have allowed her to put aside her angst and enjoy life. The abilities she has as a construct allow her to be in so many places at once, which helps her and Gyre to escape from various traps, fight battles and rescue each other. The image of chicken sized mechanical spiders carrying smoking ceramic bombs attacking Maya and Legionaries made me giggle but at the same time are very practical. They would be useful.

This is a world where both magic and technology mix to allow aircraft, long distance almost instantaneous travel, but humans still live in squalor in cities, hide behind high walls in the countryside, and the magic and tech developed by two species though to be extinct is limited to a certain class or group. It’s a blending of science fiction and fantasy that works well. I enjoyed Elariel’s questioning of the social rules and distinctions, because things are very different on ghoul society, where helping anyone in pain is an obligation, all the work is done by constructs, and decisions are made by a representative group. Her complaints about clothes are funny, and true. They are uncomfortable.

Details like Elariel being in pain because she isn’t used to walking in shoes or the difficulties of getting wagons along forest paths bring a touch of reality to this book. The descriptions of the environments people travel through and the different societies of the continent seem to have been well thought out. The writing is fluid and gripping, it’s punchy and fast paced at times while also having slower, more reflective sections. I stayed up rather later to finish the book and can’t wait for the next in the series. I know it’ll be out next year and the title ‘Emperor of Ruin’ which sounds promising.

Because I’m a bit obsessive, and I have Ashes of the Sun in the Orbit paperback edition (US publisher), and Blood of the Chosen in the Head of Zeus edition (UK publisher). I’ve just bought the opposites so I have both books in both editions. I’ll get the Goldsboro Books special hardback of the third book and the two different paperbacks. They have different covers, I’m not just being pedantic about having matching publisher’s editions. I am however aware that most people don’t do this,

Now to my criticisms. There aren’t many. Elariel’s appearance, especially the comments about her attractiveness get a bit repetitive and aren’t really adding to the plot. Other people’s reactions and her utter cluelessness get the message across adequately. The ability of the ghoul swords to cut through unmetal armour where it’s thin is mentioned in every fight, which is just unnecessary, the reader won’t forget that these swords are pretty amazing even if they do have limits. I knew we were heading into the final fight when Maya and Gyre meet up to go to the Purifier and that they would be betrayed, because the same thing happened in Ashes of the Sun. It’s a little formulaic, even though it works.

Generally, I was impressed by this solid sequel, even with the minor irritants. I recommend it to fans of science fiction and fantasy.