Maria and the star-dragons: Chapter 17

Chapter 17

Lah-Shah, Aurox. 5 IGASS standard days later

Lah-Shah hovered the shuttle over Sahrai’s compound. The late summer sunlight bathed the shipping containers in an orange light as the vegetation reached out grasping branches and a small crowd of flying monkeys rested on the hot roof. The shuttle didn’t seem to disturb the creatures even as Lah-Shah landed in the roadway. One of the creatures sat up and started furiously batting stubby wings. It climbed down the side of the container, bounced across the yard and up on to the fence, where it balanced carefully.

Lah-Shah watched in amazement as it held up a tablet and started to type. He opened the shuttle hatch, stood from his chair, stretched his own truncated wings, and prepared to leave.

“Oi!” A squeaky voice screamed. The creature had left the fence and approached the shuttle hatch.

“What” Lah-Shah said, “are you?”

The creature tapped at the tablet screen with a claw, “I Prrt-hai, am Rwwharr. Maria call us purple flying monkeys.” The tablet spoke.

“Have you seen Maria?”

Prrt-hai looked at the tablet, witing for the translation. The purple flying monkey spoke, the tablet translated and spoke again.

“Yes, yes, Maria at den with Sahrai and Suppai. We take you.”

“Is it far, I can fly us?”

“We fly! Come, we fly!” the tablet spoke again.

“No, I’ll fly us in the shuttle.” Lah-Shah found he was already getting used to talking to Prrt-hai and hearing  his question translated into a facsimile of Prrt-hai’s language, and then getting two answers, the expressive screams and clicks the creature used and the bland computer voice of the tablet.

Prrt-hai looked at the shuttle and at the tablet, reading and listening to the translation. It started typing again. The tablet said,

“No shuttle, no. Quiet. Shh! We fly.” Prrt-hai flapped its wings, climbing into the shuttle.

Lah-Shah had doubts about the ability of the flying monkeys (who, despite Maria’s expressive name for them weren’t quite purple, but a mix of orange, brown, red, and purple) to keep up with him.

“Ah,” Lah-Shah breathed out and felt his skin change to a reluctant cream, “Let me lock up and shift, and we can get going.”

“I help?” Prrt-hai was looking around now, inquisitive.

Lah-Shah feared that once the Auroxian sentients joined the Association they would find themselves a niche on ships, they seemed to have a quick grasp of technology.

“No, I’m fine, please get out of my shuttle.” The little simian alien looked from the tool box it had opened to Lah-Shah, “And leave that wrench there, thank you.”

Prrt-hai blew a raspberry and hopped down, taking the tool with it.

Lah-Shah flickered a frustrated green, “Just stay clear of the shuttle,”

Lah-Shah followed Prrt-hai and about a dozen of the purple flying monkeys as they flew over the forest, towards a grey bluff that rose out of the slowly rising ground like a metal ruler dropped in the forest. Tree-like vegetation whipped by, small bat-like creatures swooped past, chasing even smaller flying animals and avoiding the whip tendrils of the vegetation, while chittering angrily in the ultra-sonic range.

It was some distance, Lah-Shah calculated they’d been flying for a standard hour when they flew over the bluff and down into a cove, where water from a stream pooled and the vegetation had been cut back, revealing a small valley. Lah-Shah landed in the valley, where the ground around the stream was marshy. He hopped awkwardly further from the water and looked around. The cove walls were pock-marked with caves, too evenly spaced to be natural. Small faces poked out of some of the caves.

Too his left, near the forest edge, a group sat around a fire pit. A tent had been erected beneath a collection of branches. Several of the flying Auroxians landed by the fire and started chatting in their screaming language. Most banked over the pool and made neat landings in the caves. The sun was going down, making the cove shadowed and the fire brighter.

Prrt-hai landed on Lah-Shah’s back, tapping at the tablet at the same time.

“Maria and Sahrai by fire. With Suppai den.”

“Ah, at last!”

Maria walked towards him, tiredness and anxiety in every step, mud on xyr clothes and face. Another of the Auroxians, also carrying a tablet, hopped along beside his assistant.

“Maria, you’re safe! Why haven’t you answered my messages?” He turned his long serpentine neck to look at Prrt-hai, “And why is there a flying monkey on my back?”

Prrt-hai grinned as it read the translation. Or showed its teeth. It wasn’t a friendly look. Prrt-hai bounced down off Lah-Shah’s back, much to his relief, and fluttered over to Maria and xyr friend.

TBR Review: The Last Gifts of the Universe, by Riley August

Format: 208 pages, Paperback
Published: July 31, 2025 by Penguin
ISBN: 9781804950647

A dying universe.

When the Home worlds finally achieved the technology to venture out into the stars, they found a graveyard of dead civilizations, a sea of lifeless gray planets and their ruins. What befell them is unknown. All Home knows is that they are the last civilization left in the universe, and whatever came for the others will come for them next.

A search for answers.

Scout is an Archivist tasked with scouring the dead worlds of the cosmos for their last gifts: interesting technology, cultural rituals—anything left behind that might be useful to the Home worlds and their survival. During an excavation on a lifeless planet, Scout unearths something unbelievable: a surviving message from an alien who witnessed the world-ending entity thousands of years ago.

A past unraveled.

Blyreena was once a friend, a soul mate, and a respected leader of her people, the Stelhari. At the end of her world, she was the last one left. She survived to give one last message, one final hope to the future: instructions on how to save the universe.

An adventure at the end of a trillion lifetimes.

With the fate of everything at stake, Scout must overcome the dangers of the Stelhari’s ruined civilization while following Blyreena’s leads to collect its artifacts. If Scout can’t deliver these ground-breaking discoveries back to the Archivists, Home might not only be the last civilization to exist, but the last to finally fall.

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TBR Pile Review: Into The Drowning Deep, by Mira Grant

Published: Nov 16 2017
Pages: 496

Publisher: Orbit
ISBN: 9780356508108

NEW YORK TIMES BESTSELLING AUTHOR MIRA GRANT RETURNS WITH A RAZOR-SHARP TALE OF THE HORRORS THAT LIE BENEATH . . .

Seven years ago the Atargatis set off on a voyage to the Mariana Trench to film a mockumentary, bringing to life ancient sea creatures of legend.

It was lost at sea with all hands. Some have called it a tragedy; others have called it a hoax.

Now, a new crew has been assembled to investigate. And they’ll discover that whatever is down there is definitely no joke . . .

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Maria and the space-dragons investigate #1 March 2025 instalment

I’ve finally had a chance to type up some of the progress I’ve made on the Maria and Lah-Shah story I’ve been sharing with you for the last year (?). I have written more, but I’ve only just typed this next 2500 words up. I had two writing sessions this week, and I’ve got another this afternoon, so you might get an update before much longer. Certainly it won’t be three months this time.

I’m making this one available to all subscribers, rather than just to paid subs, because no one is paying for subs. I might go back through the posts and unlock them all.

I present to you Maria and the space-dragons investigate #1

Chapter 13 – Exploring Aurox by air – Maria

After a week staying with Sahrai, taking prophylactic medicine and observing the local life from the safety of the container house, Maria felt it was time to explore. Outside.

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Audiobook Review: Shroud, by Adrian Tchaikovsky, Narrated by Sophie Aldred

They looked into darkness. The darkness looked back . . .

An utterly gripping story of survival and first contact on a hostile planet from Adrian Tchaikovsky, author of the Arthur C. Clarke Award-winning Children of Time.

A commercial expedition to a distant star system discovers a pitch-black moon alive with radio activity. Its high-gravity, high-pressure, zero-oxygen environment is deadly to human life, but ripe for exploitation. They named it Shroud.

Under no circumstances can a human survive Shroud’s inhospitable surface – but a catastrophic accident forces Juna Ceelander and Mai Ste Etienne to make an emergency landing in a barely adequate escape vehicle. Alone, and fighting for survival, the two women embark on a gruelling journey across land, sea and air in search of salvation.

But as they travel, Juna and Mai begin to understand Shroud’s unnerving alien species. It also begins to understand them. If they escape Shroud, they’ll somehow have to explain the impossible and translate the incredible. That is, if they make it back at all . . .

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TBR Pile Review: Ardent Violet and the Infinite Eye, by Alex White

Format: 464 pages, Paperback
Published: December 3, 2024 by Orbit
ISBN: 9780316430609

In this new wide-screen space opera, humanity has met its match. An alien race of enormous robotic AI have destroyed most of humanity’s outposts. But, on the eve of the Earth’s destruction, a musician made one last desperate attempt to reach out and convince one of humanity’s enemies to switch sides. Now, earth just might have a chance to survive…

A ragtag band of misfits is all that stands in the way between an army of giant mechas and humanity’s total destruction in the second book of this big-hearted, technicolor space opera trilogy by one of the most exciting voices in science fiction, Alex White.

Ultra-glam enby pop star Ardent Violet thought they could catch a break and enjoy some time with their new boyfriend August Kitko after defeating the giant mechas hellbent on humanity’s destruction. However, Ardent didn’t count on their mecha allies summoning a host of extraterrestrials to defend Earth.

Between the diplomatic entanglements of the newly-arrived alien Coalition, and a mysterious all-powerful AI establishing a base within their solar system, there’s no rest for the wicked.

When August makes a discovery that could turn the tide of the war, Ardent Violet finds they are back in the spotlight for an encore!


My Review

I read the first book in this series August Kitko and the Mechas from Space in 2022, so I’ve been waiting a while for this book. I hope I don’t have to wait another two years for book three, because I need to know what happens to everyone!

This book is mainly written from Ardent’s perspective, although we sometimes get Gus’. Having survived the Mechas from Space, Ardent, Gus, Nisha and Hjalmar, and their Vanguards are still looking to save Earth, and humans generally, from Infinite, the A.I. that is causing all the trouble. Gus discovers that there is a way to do it, about the same time as a Coalition of alien species arrives to ‘help’. They’re all in a similar situation, having developed A.I.s that took over their species. It’s a bit complicated, but they all have Vanguards, and the Conduits all have to meet each other to work together. This happens in a great space city and it goes as well as can be expected, given that the alien civilisations are somewhat more advanced than humans. One species, a giant crab-like creature with shells encrusted with electronics, weapons, and a bad attitude, take an instant dislike to humans.

In an attempt to remove Infinite from the solar system, human and Coalition Conduits and Vanguards attack Titan. But things get a bit messy when the supposedly non-sentient Ghosts start fighting back, running away and screaming. Gus realises that something is going on and changes the mission. Which upsets the crab-alien Conduit, Scent of Rot. Their fight causes all sorts of fallout and Gus spends the rest of the novel under a death sentence for heresy against the A.I./god King.

Lots of things happen in the fight against Infinite. There are some fantastic space battles, a rescue mission that gets Dahlia a pardon and a probable suicide mission in return, people die, Vanguards are destroyed, Gus, Ardent and Nisha play a concert in DeepSync. I cried. And enemies become friends.

I want to know who picked up Gus and Scent of Rot’s escape craft! I want to know how Ardent handles the possible death and escape of Gus. I want to return to this world as soon as possible, it’s so much fun! I loved the characters, especially the development of Nisha as a character, and the complex negotiations that come with inter-species cooperation. The alien species were based on Earth animals, mostly, but changed in a way that would be strange, and logical. Except the octopus-like species; octopuses are alien enough as it is. Them running around in giant bubbles of water in non-marine environments is relatively expected. They would if they could.

Seriously, Alex White, hurry up and write book three!

Audiobook Review: Service Model, by Adrian Tchaikovsky

Format: Audible Audio
Published: June 6, 2024 by Tor
Language: English

Narrated by the author

Description

To fix the world they first must break it further.

Humanity is a dying breed, utterly reliant on artificial labour and service. When a domesticated robot gets a nasty little idea downloaded into their core programming, they murder their owner. The robot then discovers they can also do something else they never did before: run away. After fleeing the household, they enter a wider world they never knew existed, where the age-old hierarchy of humans at the top is disintegrating, and a robot ecosystem devoted to human wellbeing is finding a new purpose.


My Review

I listened to this book through the ‘get one audiobook a month using Amazon Music’ thing, so I can’t keep it, but as soon as the book comes out in paperback, I’m getting it.

Charles is a valet robot who murders his master. But he doesn’t know why. Sent to be assessed and probably destroyed, he discovers freedom. He’s very confused by the world outside of the manor where he served is reclusive master for years. It’s all very disorderly and untidy. Estates are falling down, robot servants are rusting at their posts, and there’s no humans about.

Until Charles meets ‘The Wonk’. For the sake of Charles not getting crushed, The Wonk tells Charles, now going by UnCharles, that she’s a robot too. Despite all evidence to the contrary, Charles believes this to be the case almost to the end of the book. It is quite funny. UnCharles sets off to find humans to serve and The Wonk sets off to find the Library.

They meet later, and then go off on an adventure together, first to find the Library, and then to meet god. Turns out god is an A.I. judge, programmed to mete out justice. He also knows a lot about why Charles killed his master. And why the world collapsed.

Adrian Tchaikovsky can never be accused of not being political. His work always has a point. In this one, the subject of A.I. is discussed using humour and allegory. A.I. can only learn from what we feed it, it can only work within the parameters given.

Tchaikovsky also alludes to the compounds and bunkers wealthy people are building all over the world to escape to, when disaster strikes. They’ve managed to hoard all the wealth and destroy everything, and then they plan to run away when consequences occur. Since a lot of these people are the same people playing around with A.I. this is an easy inclusion in the novel.

But everyone dies. You can’t hide from death. Hopefully, the evil gits will die in attempting to run away and the resources they’ve hoarded can be share fairly among the survivors. (I don’t like billionaires.)

I enjoyed this novel, especially UnCharles’ confusion, and The Wonk’s sarcastic responses to his desire to serve. The vision of a destroyed wasteland was haunting and the critique of the way humans treat each other is spot on.

Adrian also did a very good job as narrator.

Maria and the Space-Dragons Investigate #1 -December 2024 instalment

I know this post is a few weeks late, but I’ve been ill, and in pain. I’ve decided to make this one publicly available rather than behind a pay wall. The story is over 19000 words long now, and there’s some difference between the story I’ve written in my notebook and the one you’ll read here.

Chapter 12 – Lah-Shah  – In the asteroid belt

Lah-Shah looked over the scan data. The asteroid was quite large, dense and peanut shaped. There was plenty of metal in it, and the shape suggested that two asteroids had got a bit too close to each other and collided at some point. It surprised Lah-Shah that the humans on Aurox hadn’t sent auto-miners out here; despite the distance from the planet, it would be worth the effort.

A large object showed up on the scans; it lay buried beneath the surface, in the waist of the asteroid, hidden by scattered debris and surface shadows. It had a familiar outline on the scans. Lah-Shah ran the images through the control system and found a match: an IGASS science division mission ship.

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British Fantasy Awards 2024

Last night I attended the BFS Awards, and thought I’d share the winners. I am sure there are already lists out there and the ceremony was live streamed.

The awards were hosted by Stew Hotston. The awards aren’t ready yet (supply chain issues) so the are replaced by framed prints and will be delivered eventually.

The first award was the BFS Short Story competition.

Presented by Stew Hotston

  1. Catherine Rose Davis
  2. P = f/A, by Hannah ?
  3. Samuel, by Very Bruce

Art Competition

Presented by Jenni Coutts

  1. Fungus Night, by ?
  2. Night Witch, by Sophie Hill
  3. Survival, by Tara Bush

Best Collection

Presented by Shona Bond

Jackel, Jackel: Tales if the Dark and Fantastic, by Tobi Ogundiran (Undertow Publications)

Best Novella

Presented by Nick Wells

The Last Dragoners of Bowbazar, by Indra Das (Subterranean Press)

Best Non-Fiction

Presented by Pete Sutton

Writing the Future, eds. Dan Coxon and Richard V Hirst (Dead Ink)

Best short fiction

Presented by Priya Sharma

The Brazen Head of Westinghouse, by Tim Major (IZ Digital)

Best Anthology

Presented by Robin Duncan

Out There Screaming: An Anthology of New Black Horror, ed. Jordan Peele (Picador)

Best Artist

Presented by David Moore

Asya Yordonova

Best Audio

Presented by Neil Bond

The Tiny Bookcase, by Nico Rogers and Ben Holroyd-Dell

(Nico’s speech was very funny!)

Best Independent Press

Presented by Bella Pagan

Flame Tree Press, collected by Nick Wells on behalf of everyone at Flame Tree

Sydney J Bounds Award for Best Newcomer

Presented by Anna Smith Spark

Teika Marija Smits, for “Umbiblical” (Newcon Press), and “Waterlore” (Black Shuck Books)

Best Magazine/Periodical

Presented by Jenni Coutts

Shoreline of Infinity

The August Derleth Award for Best Horror Novel

Presented by Ramsey Campbell

Don’t Fear the Reaper, by Stephen Graham Jones (Titan)

Robert Holdstock Award for Best Fantasy Novel

Presented by Stephan Aryan

Talonsister, by Jen Williams (Titan)

Charles Edward Wagner Award

Presented to Shona Kinsella

Ramsey Campbell

Legends of FantasyCon

Presented by Karen Fishwick

Debbie Bennett


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Maria and the space-dragons investigate #1 – July 2024 instalment

Chapter 7 – Lah-Shah

Lah-Shah took the pilot’s seat, gazing through the currently unshielded screen out into the hanger. The ship was a standard shuttle, with all the usual screens and operation boards, but being an Academy ship probably had some hidden features. He’d need to play around at some point to work out what they all were, but now was not the time.